Tuesday, 12 March 2013

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Introduction
Which one better is eye glasses or contact lens? Glasses also spectacles which is a frames-bearing lenses that people wearing in front of their eyes normally for the correction of vision problems such as hyperopia (far-sightedness), myopia (near-sightedness), astigmatism (corneal distortion) and presbyopia (inability of eye to focus up close due to hardening of natural lens). Besides, contact lens placed directly onto the cornea of the eye (Troy Bedinghaus,2009) So people should know the different cost between glasses and contact lenses to compare which is better, people who are had vision problem can differentiate the risk of eye infection between glasses and contact lens. People also can feel that which one give more comfortable of their eyes which is glasses or contact lens.

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A)    The different cost between spectacles and contact lenses

1)      Glasses are cheaper compared to contact lenses.
a)                  Contact lenses usually are more expensive than glasses.
i)     According to Lillian Downey, consumers will spend a lot of money to buy contact lenses compare to normal glasses.
b)                 The glasses can use long lasting than contact lenses.
ii)    According to Lillian Downey, the period of using the glasses is usually elongated than contact lenses.
2)      The cost of the adjustment contact lens of theaccessories, and cleaning materials.
a)                  Need to spend cost to buy accessories materials.
i)     According to Patricia Hannah (2008), we would spend a lot of money to buy contact lenses’ thingy
B)    The different risk of eye infection between glasses and contact lenses

1)      The contact lenses have potential to introduce bacteria to the eyes.
a)                  This is caused by environmental factors.
i)      According Lillian Downey, ecological is one of the factors.
b)                 If the lens does notfit to someone’seyes, the eyes will become itchy, allergic, red and watery.
i)          According to Lillian Downey, people that wearing the lenses will feel uncomfortable and sensitive to their eyes.
2)      Do not comply with proper lenses care.
a)                  Use of tap water to clean the lenses.
b)      Based on Lillian Downey, does not use the solution to clean the lenses.

3)      Do not throw the lenses when sleeping.
a)      Based on Lillian Downey, user put the lenses everywhere when he/she is sleepy.

4)      Uses lens that already expired.

C)    The different discomfort of eye between glasses and contact lens

a)      Take a long time for those who wear it have to be careful because there is a proper ways to wear contact lenses.

i) According to Lillian Downey, it is complicated to wear lenses so that can waste our time.

b)      Metal frame glasses can cause pain around the ear’s area.




Conclusion
In conclusion, glasses are better than contact lenses because wearing glasses is more comfortable than contact lenses. Besides, glasses are less risk compared to contact lenses because contact lenses give infection to the eyes. In addition, glasses are cheaper than contact lenses. People should know on which one is better either glasses or contact lenses. Precisely, it shows that glasses are more suitable for people to use. Besides, wearing glasses actually cannot harm our vision compared to contact lenses. This is because, glasses is much more preferable and safety especially for our vision.

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  1. Add more specific supporting details and please check how you should do the in-text citation.

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